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图书标签:

• 雅思写作
• 写作范文
• 新东方
• 剑桥雅思
• IELTS
• 写作技巧
• 高分写作
• 留学考试
• 英语学习
• 备考资料

出版社： 浙江教育出版社

ISBN：9787553618395

版次：1

商品编码：11554827

品牌：新东方（XDF.CN）

包装：平装

外文名称：Model Essays for IELTS Writing

开本：16开

出版时间：2014-10-01

用纸：胶版纸

页数：248

正文语种：中文，英文

编辑推荐

　　●收集近十年雅思写作题目，并提供高分范文，全部写作话题一网打尽
　　●以雅思写作题目为出发点，从词汇、句型、篇章、思路四个方面全面提高考生写作能力，科学、专业、实用
　　●配备<特别提醒><词汇升级><句型升级><写作点拨><论据积累>五大复习指南，一站式解决雅思写作的破题、词汇、句型、篇章、思路五大难点
　　●书中范文均给出中文译文，并对每一道雅思写作题目从构思角度予以指导
　　●列举雅思写作考试常见话题的经典论据，帮助考生拓展思路，提高表达能力

内容简介

　　本书收集了近十年来在雅思A类和G类写作考试的Task 2中出现过的各类题材的议论文写作题， 并且为每道雅思题目提供了高质量的范文。除了范文之外， 每一道雅思题目的后面还附有单词注解、 汉语译文、 特别提醒、 相关题目、 写作点拨、 词汇升级、 句型升级、 论据积累等自学辅导栏目。考生在阅读本书之前， 请先了解各个自学辅导栏目的设置目的以及学习重点， 结合自身情况对这些内容进行取舍， 以提高学习效率、 取得最佳的复习效果。
　　1. 单词注释
　　这个栏目归纳整理了范文中出现的难度相对较高的词汇， 并附有音标和汉语释义。
　　如果考生的复习时间多于三个月， 请记忆这些单词
　　如果复习时间在三个月至一个月之间， 请选择性地记忆范文中出现的、 打算在考场里使用的单词
　　如果复习时间少于一个月， 请跳过这个栏目， 直接进入“词汇升级”环节
　　2. 汉语译文
　　这个栏目提供了范文的汉语译文。为了方便读者的理解， 大部分译文以直译为主， 因而部分语句会略显生涩， 望考生见谅。立志在雅思写作考试中夺取高分并且有较长复习时间的考生， 可以在精读完范文以后， 试着对照范文的汉语译文， 将文章再译成英文。用心比较自己的译文和范文在文字方面的不同， 可以让你的英语表达能力在短时间内有一个很大的提高。
　　3. 特别提醒
　　这个栏目将雅思写作中出现的题目按照题材进行了分类， 并且指出了各类题材在雅思考试中出现频率的高低。由于雅思写作试题重复使用的几率很高， 请考生特别留意那些在近几年的雅思写作考试中反复出现的热门题材。
　　4. 推荐指数
　　这个栏目用星号★标注了每道写作题目在将来的雅思考试中出现几率的高低， 最高推荐指数为五星。
　　5. 相关题目
　　这个栏目提供了与各道雅思写作题目类似的其他雅思写作题目在本书中的编号。这些题材类似的雅思题目， 组成了“相关写作题目组”， 方便考生复习。
　　如果考生的复习时间多于三个月， 请认真阅读“相关写作题目组”里的各篇范文， 并用心体会这些范文在构思和表达方面的异同
　　如果复习时间在三个月至一个月之间， 请在阅读了“相关写作题目组”里的各篇范文之后， 选择性地精读其中的一篇
　　如果复习时间少于一个月， 请直接从每组“相关写作题目组”里挑选一篇范文进行精读
　　6. 写作点拨

作者简介

　　刘巍巍，香港理工大学英文系博士，新东方教育科技集团资深教师。2005年、2006年、2007年“新东方教育科技集团优秀教师奖”得主。
　　20岁登上新东方讲台，曾被学生曾被学员称为“神童”教师，迄今面授过近十万学子。英文功底深厚，授课风格冷静、理智，以理性和实效著称。
　　曾多次主持和参加新东方新教师培训工作，多次赴海外参加国际学术交流活动，并在《羊城晚报》等主流媒体上发表雅思专题文章。
　　
　　方林，资深英汉同声传译译员，毕业于上海外国语大学高级翻译学院，获翻译学硕士学位，并先后获得联合国、欧盟等国际机构认证的国际会议口译资格证，包括交替传译、同声传译两部分。
　　曾多次承担大型国际会议的同声传译工作，在同声传译、英汉笔译以及英语写作等领域有着丰富的教学和实战经验。

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目录

1. In the past， people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays， they change their jobs frequently. Please give the reasons and your suggestions. 2
2. What are the main tasks of universities： to offer students knowledge and skills essential for their future career， or to provide students with access to knowledge itself? What do you think university education should contain? 4
3. Should government pay for medical care and education? Why? 6
4. What is it in the mass media that has negative effects on teenagers and what measures should governments take to solve this problem? 8
5. Nowadays computers are widely used in education. As a result， some people think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 10
6. Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree? 12
7. Some people think that children should learn to compete， but others think that children should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. 14
8. The culture of different countries are becoming increasingly similar， so there is no point for people to go traveling abroad for they could have the same experience at home. Do you agree or disagree? 16
9. Some people think that people will forget their own tradition and history because they no longer wear their traditional costumes. Do you agree or disagree? 18
10. Traditional food is undergoing great changes and being replaced by new diets. What do you think are the reasons and what do you think about this phenomenon? 20
11. Some people think the Olympic Games will no longer play an important role in the 21st century， and the 2004 game should be the last one. Do you agree or disagree? 22
12. In most parts of the world， the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. Discuss the main traffic problems in your country， their causes and possible solutions. 24
13. The world of work is changing rapidly. People today no longer take one job for life. Discuss the causes of these changes. What suggestions would you make for young people to prepare themselves for the work in future? 26
14. As science and technology contribute most to the development of society， science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields（eg. business， language， etc.）. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 28
15. Nowadays people can use computers to talk， learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 30
16. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion? 32
17. Some people say that the age of books has passed； information can be accessed via videos， computers， television， films and so forth. Other people think books and written words will still be essential for information dissemination and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 34
18. Television is dangerous because it destroys the family tie and community spirit. It is said by some that television absorbs so much of people’s time that they have no time to talk to each other. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 36
19. People who do not know how to use computer will become more and more disadvantaged. State the disadvantages and what action governments should take. 38
20. Scientific and technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However， most scientists are no longer able to find the solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 40
21. Intelligent robots will be more widely used in the future. Is this a blessing or a curse? What is your opinion? 42
22. The reason why some families don’t buy television set is that the parents want their children to spend more time on creative thinking or even inventions. Agree or disagree? 44
23. Newspaper， radio， television and computer each has its merits and drawbacks. What is the most efficient means of acquiring information? Give your reasons. 46
24. Some people think science contributes more to the society； others believe subjects such as language or business make a bigger contribution. What’s your opinion? 48
25. Modern technology has greatly influenced people’s ways of entertainment， making people less creative. Do you agree or disagree? 50
26. Some parents maintain that co-education is better for their children while others believe it is better if boys and girls go to single-sex school. Discuss. 52
27. Many schools are troubled by students’ behavioral problems. What are the causes? What solutions do you recommend? 54
28. Should the teacher in physical education class encourage the students to be more competitive or urge them to cooperate with one another? What is your opinion? 56
29. Which is a better place for the aged， home or nursing home? 58
30. It is said that life is becoming increasingly stressful for most people. What is the reason of this phenomenon and how could this problem be solved? 60
31. Happiness is considered important by all people. Why is it hard to define happiness? What are the factors that are necessary to achieve happiness? 62
32. Advertising adversely affects young people， so it should be strictly limited. Do you agree or not? 64
33. More and more women go out to work. Hence， it is the governments’ responsibility to provide daycare service for the children of working mother， free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 66
34. Is it fair that sports professionals earn much more money than people in other important professions? Give reasons for both sides of the argument and your opinion. 68
35. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of people traveling abroad to work for a certain period of time. 70
36. Waste disposal presents increasing problems， especially in urban areas. What do you think are the causes? Give some suggestion to the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish. 72
37. Statistics show that cities are increasing in size. What do you think are the causes and possible consequences? 74
38. There are more and more cars in cities. Hence， pedestrians and cyclists are endangered by heavy traffic. Gardens and streets give way to car parks and highways. How can city planners satisfy all people’s needs? 76
39. Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other， while others argue that the aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it， so international aid should not be given to the poor countries. Discuss. 78
40. Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas （through words， pictures， music or films）. However， some people think government should impose certain restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
41. Most countries spend large amount of money on weapons to defend themselves though they are not at war. Some believe those countries should spend the money to help poor countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 82
42. How to measure a country’s success? Some say it depends on the quality of citizens’ life， but others say it means a prosperous economy. What’s your opinion? 84
43. Education is of vital importance to individual development and social progress. What should education consist of in order to fulfill both ends? 86
44. It is right that college graduates earn higher salaries than the less well-educated in the community. But they should also pay the full cost of their study. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 88
45. Some people say that the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects. Do you agree or disagree? 90
46. Many people are afraid of leaving their house because of crime. Some think more actions should be taken to prevent crime， but others think little can be done. What is your view? 92
47. Many people believe that subjects such as music or sports are not useful. Thus school should concentrate on subjects that offer better career prospect. What is your opinion? 94
48. Each year some languages die out. Some say this is good because fewer languages would make communication easier and relieve people of the burden of learning foreign languages. Do you agree or disagree? 96
49. Is distant learning as effective as school education? 98
50. Some say that children should obey their parents and teachers， while others believe that too much control will not help to prepare children for their adult life. Discuss both sides of the views. 100
51. Some think we can acquire knowledge from news reports. Others believe we cannot trust journalists. What do you think? What important qualities should a journalist have? 102
52. Each year， crime committed by young people is on the rise. What are the reasons? Suggest some solutions. 104
53. Some people think that traditional culture is being damaged as it is used as a tool to make money in the tourism industry. Others think it is the only way to preserve and protect culture and tradition. Discuss and state your opinion. 106
54. Some think students can learn more effectively in groups， while others think they should study alone. What are the benefits of each method? Which one do you think is more effective? 108
55. People are now able to perform everyday tasks such as shopping， banking and business transactions without meeting others face to face. What are the effects on both the individual and the society? 110
56. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to reduce the amount of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree? 112
57. Children are currently having extra classes after normal lessons. What are the positive and negative effects? What is your opinion? 114
58. Young children should stay in kindergartens or nursery schools so that their mothers can return to work earlier. Do you agree? 116
59. People now spend much time and money on their appearance and pay more attention to their dressing. Give reasons and your opinion on this. 118
60. Many people believe that we have developed into a‘throw-away society’ which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish. Do you agree or disagree? 120
61. Some people agree that all kinds of jobs should be equally open to men and women. Others think that some jobs should only be suitable for men and women respectively. Discuss and give your opinion. 122
62. Nowadays college students or even high school students start to work at a younger age. Do you think that it is a positive or negative development? 124
63. Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the bicycle. 126
64. Modern technology gives people more free time， but actually they are busier than before. Do you agree or disagree? 128
65. Many people think that education is losing its value. Do you agree or disagree? 130
66. Shopping has become a favorite pastime for some young people. Do we need to encourage the young to do something more useful in their free time? What is your opinion? 132
67. Is it necessary to forbid smoking? State your opinion and reasons. 134
68. Education used to be a period of schooling. But now people regard it as a lifelong process. Do you agree or disagree? 136
69. People have different hobbies such as collecting stamps or wood carving. Why are hobbies important to us? How can we benefit from having hobbies? 138
70. What are the advantages of marrying at an early and old age respectively? 140
71. Should people doing different jobs have holidays at different time of the year? What is your opinion? 142
72. Some people like to risk their lives in some dangerous sports such as mountain climbing. Some say rescuers need not risk their own lives to save those trapped on mountain peaks and that people should be responsible for their own lives. What is your opinion? 144
73. Radio will be replaced by other forms of mass media such as TV or the Internet. Do you agree or disagree? 146
74. What are the problems for people living and working in the countryside? What should the government do to solve them? 148
75. Some people say that we should not encourage sports games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extent do you agree with it? 150
76. Some people regard animals as pets while others see them as a source of food and clothing. What is your opinion? 152
77. Some people believe that damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement of living standards. What is your opinion? 154
78. The spread of English and growth of international tourism have some negative effects on countries’ languages and traditional culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 156
79. Traditional art is a sign of civilization. Do you think government should subsidize musicians， painters， actors or opera companies? What should the government do? 158
80. Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore， government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree? 160
81. Today， many students take the course International News in secondary school. Some say it is a waste of time. Discuss and state your opinion. 162
82. If you have enough money， will you use it to buy a house or to start a business? 164
83. It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your reasons. 166
84. Some people say that children should spend their leisure time on educational activities. Some people believe it is dangerous to put too much pressure on children. What is your opinion? 168
85. Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education， high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers， but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think? 170
86. Choosing a suitable career is a problem that faces many young people. What are the reasons? What suggestion would you give to them to help them make the right decision? 172
87. Many parents use punishment to teach their kids the differences between right and wrong. They think punishment is necessary in helping them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these parents? What kind of punishments would you recommend? 174
88. Some people say that telling the truth is not always essential， and that it is necessary to tell lies sometimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give specific reasons to support your ideas. 176
89. Some say that students with similar academic abilities should be put in one class. Others believe a class should include students with different academic performances. Discuss. 178
90. Some say it is impossible for a woman to work full-time and remain a good mother. So they should be paid by the government to stay at home to raise the children. What is your opinion? 180
91. Your character is strongly influenced by the place where you grew up. In what ways can growing up in a city or in the countryside influence one’s character? Please give your view. 182
92. Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. State your point of view. 184
93. There are lots of difficulties for the new students on the first day in a high school or college because they feel lonely. What are the difficulties they may face on the first day? What can the school or college do to solve these problems? 186
94. Some people think that their children’s life will be different from their own. What is your opinion? 188
95. Today some people have to work away from their family. What are the advantages and disadvantages? 190
96. Foods are produced more cheaply today by using improved fertilizers and machinery. However， some of the methods used in agriculture are dangerous to human health and local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 192
97. Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However， some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? 194
98. The mass media， including television， radio and newspapers， have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. 196
99. Surveillance cameras are now installed in many shops and supermarkets to prevent shoplifting. But many people are against this because they think it is a disregard of privacy. What are your views about this? 198
100. It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use specific reasons to explain your view. 200
101. If a five-year old commits a crime， should his/her parents take the responsibility and how should the parents be punished? What should be the age of a child when parents no longer take the responsibility for his or her behavior? 202
102. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health and social development as it is for physical conditions. What is your opinion? 204
103. The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer. 206
104. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy， or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives? 208
105. Some countries allow women to join the armed forces， while some others think that armed forces such as navy or army don’t suit women. Do you agree or disagree? 210
106. Many people think it’s wrong to lock animals up in zoos because it is cruel and serves little purpose. But others think that the animals in zoos can bring happiness to people， especially the kids. What is your opinion? 212
107. Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients but concentrate more on all patients’ health， no matter how rich they are. Give your view. 214
108. Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated， using community service programs for instance， before being reintroduced to society? 216
109. Many schools demand that the students should wear uniform. Some people think that such a practice undermines students’ personality and individuality. What do you think? 218
110. Thanks to modern technology， people are living a longer life. Is it a good thing or a bad one? State your opinion. 220
111. What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting married with a foreigner? 222
112. Are women suitable to become police officers? Give your reasons and examples. 224
113. Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Please give your own opinion. 226

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新东方：剑桥雅思写作高分范文 [Model Essays for IELTS Writing] 深入剖析雅思写作精髓，助力考生剑指高分 备考雅思，写作是许多考生攻坚的难关。想要在有限的时间内提升写作成绩，掌握地道的表达、清晰的逻辑以及严谨的论证至关重要。正是在这样的背景下，《新东方：剑桥雅思写作高分范文 [Model Essays for IELTS Writing]》应运而生，旨在为广大雅思考生提供一套系统、实用的写作指导体系。本书汇集了大量经过精心挑选和分析的雅思写作高分范文，并在此基础上深入解读其写作思路、结构布局、语言运用及论证方法，帮助考生从模仿到超越，最终实现写作能力的飞跃。 一、 核心价值：高分范文的深度解析与实战运用 本书并非简单堆砌范文，而是将每一篇范文视为一个宝贵的学习案例，进行全方位的剖析。我们深知，仅仅阅读范文是远远不够的，理解其“好”在哪里，才能真正内化为自己的能力。因此，本书的核心价值在于： 精选高分范文，覆盖题型广度与深度： 本书精选了涵盖Task 1（学术类和培训类）与Task 2（不同话题类型）的经典高分范文。这些范文由经验丰富的雅思名师根据历年考试趋势和评分标准精心撰写或挑选，确保其在内容、结构、语言和论证方面均达到甚至超越雅思官方的评分标准。无论是描述图表、写信，还是议论文、报告类写作，都能在本书中找到权威的参考。 深度解析写作思路与逻辑： 每一篇范文都配有详尽的写作思路解析。我们会带领考生一步步剖析作者是如何理解题目要求，如何构思文章的整体框架，如何选择论据，以及如何组织段落之间的逻辑联系。这种深入的分析将帮助考生掌握“如何思考”的问题，而不仅仅是“如何写”的技巧。例如，在议论文部分，我们会分析作者是如何明确表达自己的观点（thesis statement），如何展开分论点（topic sentences），以及如何运用恰当的论据（evidence and examples）来支持论点。 剖析结构布局的精妙之处： 雅思写作讲究结构清晰，逻辑严谨。本书将详细拆解范文的段落结构，包括引言（introduction）、主体段落（body paragraphs）和结论（conclusion）的写作要点。我们会分析引言如何有效地引入话题并提出观点，主体段落如何做到主题句明确、论证充分，以及结论如何有力地总结全文并呼应开头。考生将学会如何构建一篇结构完整、条理清晰的文章。 洞悉语言运用的高分密码： 词汇和语法是写作的基础。本书不仅会展示高分范文中使用的词汇和句式，更会深入分析这些语言的运用是否恰当、精准。我们会引导考生学习更具学术性、地道性的词汇替换，以及如何运用多样化的句式（如从句、并列句、倒装句等）来提升文章的表达能力和流畅度。重点在于理解为何这些词汇和句式能够获得高分，以及如何在自己的写作中灵活运用。 掌握论证方法的技巧与策略： 论证是雅思写作的核心。本书会深入讲解范文中是如何进行有效的论证的。这包括如何运用具体事例、统计数据、专家观点、对比分析、因果分析等多种论证方法。考生将学会如何让自己的论证更有说服力，如何避免空泛的陈述，以及如何有效地回应题目中的辩证关系。 二、 内容亮点：系统化提升，全方位赋能 《新东方：剑桥雅思写作高分范文 [Model Essays for IELTS Writing]》不仅提供范文和解析，更构建了一个系统化的学习框架，帮助考生全面提升写作能力。 Task 1 全面覆盖，精炼要点： 图表类（Graphs, Charts, Tables, Diagrams）： 详细讲解不同类型图表的描述要点，包括如何识别和提取关键信息（趋势、峰值、低谷、对比、百分比、变化幅度等），如何使用恰当的动词、副词和形容词来描述变化，以及如何组织描述的顺序。书中范文会展示如何有效地概括整体趋势（overview）和选择细节进行深入分析。 地图类（Maps）： 教授如何清晰地描述地图上的变化，包括空间方位的表达（如north, south, east, west, adjacent to, opposite to）、变化的描述（如demolished, replaced by, built, expanded）。 流程图类（Process Diagrams）： 指导考生如何准确地描述生产或自然过程，包括使用恰当的连接词（such as firstly, next, then, finally）和被动语态来描述步骤。 通知/邮件/信函类（Letters）： 针对培训类Task 1，本书会分析不同类型的信函（如投诉信、请求信、咨询信、感谢信等）的写作目的、语气、格式以及常用表达。考生将学会如何根据具体情境，恰当地组织语言，完成任务。 Task 2 深度剖析，题型制胜： 社会现象类（Social Issues）： 涵盖教育、环境、科技、媒体、犯罪、健康等多个社会热点话题。范文会展示如何分析问题的成因、影响，以及提出解决方案。 科技发展类（Technological Advancements）： 探讨科技进步对个人、社会和环境的影响。范文会分析正面和负面影响，以及科技发展的未来趋势。 环境问题类（Environmental Concerns）： 关注气候变化、污染、资源枯竭等全球性环境挑战。范文会分析这些问题的紧迫性，以及个人和政府可以采取的措施。 教育理念类（Educational Philosophy）： 探讨教育的本质、目的、方法等。范文会涉及学科设置、教学方法、学生评估等话题。 文化习俗类（Cultural Practices）： 讨论文化多样性、全球化对文化的影响、传统与现代的融合等。 政府政策类（Government Policies）： 关注政府在经济、社会、文化等方面的决策及其影响。 因果与讨论类（Cause and Effect / Discussion）： 重点讲解如何分析事件的原因和结果，以及如何就某个议题展开正反两方面的讨论，并清晰表达自己的立场。 利弊分析类（Advantages and Disadvantages）： 分析某个事物、政策或趋势的正面和负面影响。范文会展示如何平衡分析，并清晰总结。 问题与解决方案类（Problems and Solutions）： 识别并分析某个问题的根源，并提出切实可行的解决方案。 专项技能训练，巩固提升： 常用词汇与句型精选： 针对不同话题和题型，本书会提炼出高频词汇、短语和句型，帮助考生积累表达素材。 逻辑连接词详解： 详细讲解各种逻辑连接词（如however, moreover, therefore, consequently, in contrast）的用法，帮助考生构建更流畅、更有逻辑的文章。 范文亮点精讲： 在每篇范文解析中，我们会特别标出并点评精彩的词汇、句型、论证方式，让考生“学有所指”，知道学习的重点在哪里。 三、 学习方法与建议：事半功倍的备考策略 掌握了本书的内容，还需要配合科学的学习方法，才能达到最佳的学习效果。 1. 精读与模仿： 初步阅读： 首次阅读范文时，可以先不看解析，尝试理解文章大意、结构和主要论点。 精读分析： 结合本书的解析，逐句、逐段地分析范文的写作思路、词汇选择、句式运用和论证方法。理解作者为何这样写，以及这样做的好处。 模仿练习： 针对同一类型题目，尝试模仿范文的结构和表达方式，进行写作练习。注意不要照搬照抄，而是内化其写作逻辑和语言特点。 2. 背诵与运用： 积累高频表达： 将范文中的优秀词汇、短语和句型摘录下来，进行有针对性的背诵和记忆。 主题词汇积累： 针对雅思写作中常出现的主题，如教育、科技、环境等，建立自己的主题词汇库，并在写作中加以运用。 句型替换练习： 尝试用不同的句型来表达相同的意思，提高语言的灵活性和多样性。 3. 练习与反馈： 限时写作： 按照雅思考试要求，进行限时写作练习，培养考试节奏感。 自我检查与修改： 写完文章后，对照范文和评分标准，检查文章的结构、逻辑、词汇、语法等方面，并进行修改。 寻求反馈： 如果条件允许，可以将自己的习作交给老师或有经验的同学批改，获取更专业的反馈。 4. 举一反三： 分析题目： 在看到新的题目时，尝试运用本书中教授的分析方法，快速审题，构思文章框架。 整合资源： 将本书所学到的技巧和素材，与其他备考资料相结合，形成全面的备考方案。 四、 谁适合阅读本书？ 备考雅思写作的考生： 无论是初次备考还是多次备考，希望系统提升雅思写作成绩的考生。 写作基础薄弱的考生： 希望通过模仿和学习高分范文，来提升写作思路、结构和语言能力的考生。 追求高分的考生： 希望了解雅思写作高分标准的具体体现，学习更地道、更具学术性的表达方式的考生。 时间有限的考生： 本书的精选范文和深度解析，能够帮助考生在有限的时间内，抓住重点，高效学习。 《新东方：剑桥雅思写作高分范文 [Model Essays for IELTS Writing]》不仅仅是一本范文集，更是您通往雅思写作高分的得力助手。本书将以其严谨的编排、专业的解析和实用的指导，助您自信应对雅思写作挑战，实现理想分数！

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这本备考资料简直是为我这种“写作恐惧症”患者量身定做的救星！老实说，我一开始对雅思写作抱持着一种近乎绝望的态度，总觉得自己的表达方式太啰嗦，逻辑也总是抓不住重点。市面上的书汗牛充栋，挑起来真是眼花缭乱，很多都堆砌着晦涩的语法点或者泛泛而谈的“建议”，真正能落到实处的干货少之又少。然而，当我翻开这本的时候，那种焦虑感一下子就消散了。它没有上来就给我一堆冷冰冰的规则，而是非常巧妙地将高分范文作为切入点，让我得以一窥“高分作文”究竟是怎样一种结构和思维模式。特别是那些针对不同题型——Task 1的小作文和大作文Task 2的不同体裁——所展示出的标准结构，简直是醍醐灌顶。我发现，很多我原本认为必须用复杂句式来表现的观点，其实通过清晰的论证层次和精准的词汇选择，一样能达到理想的效果。这本书的厉害之处在于，它不仅仅是“给答案”，更重要的是“教你怎么思考”如何组织一篇符合考官预期的文章。对于那些和我一样，基础尚可但总是无法突破“及格线”的考生来说，这种由范文倒推写作逻辑的学习方法，效率是极高的。我尤其欣赏它对连贯与衔接（Cohesion and Coherence）的处理方式，那些过渡词的运用绝非简单堆砌，而是深思熟虑后的自然流畅。

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对于像我这样，习惯了通过大量阅读来“磨耳朵”和“积累语感”的学习者而言，这本书的阅读体验也相当舒适。尽管它是一本应试用书，但文字的处理上并未显得过于僵硬或刻板。范文的语言风格多样，有的侧重于逻辑的严密性，有的则在词藻的选择上展现了更高的文学性，这让我可以接触到不同风格的“雅思腔调”。更重要的是，它没有将“雅思写作”描绘成一个遥不可及的彼岸，而是通过这些精心挑选的范例，展示了如何用清晰、有效的方式去传达复杂的思想。我发现，在研读这些范文的过程中，我对于“如何用最少的文字表达最丰富的意思”有了更深的体会。这种对语言经济性的追求，在我日常的英语学习中也带来了积极的影响。它教会我如何精简句子，如何避免不必要的重复和冗余，这对于提高整体的语言驾驭能力非常有帮助，远超出了单纯应付考试的范畴。

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真正让我感到惊喜的是，这本书在处理“高阶词汇与句式”运用上的拿捏分寸。很多辅导材料总是鼓吹考生使用“越多越难的词汇越好”，结果弄巧成拙，导致文章读起来像是一堆生硬拼凑的“高大上”词汇的堆砌，不仅自然度大打折扣，逻辑链条也常常因此变得断裂。这本书的处理方式则显得成熟和务实得多。它展示的范文，所选用的词汇和句式，无一不服务于表达的清晰性和准确性，而非单纯追求“炫技”。我留意到，它非常注重如何巧妙地嵌入那些能提升文章“学术感”的搭配（collocations），同时又保证了表达的自然流畅，这一点在Task 2的议论文中尤为关键。更绝的是，对于那些常见的、容易失分的逻辑陷阱，它通过对比“普通写法”和“高分写法”的方式进行了剖析，这种直观的冲击力远胜过枯燥的文字说明。我感觉这就像是请了一位经验极其丰富的老牌考官坐在我旁边，手把手教我如何避开那些“扣分雷区”。对于希望将自己的写作水平从“能看懂”提升到“能拿高分”的进阶学习者来说，这种精妙的示范作用是不可替代的。

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如果让我总结这本书给我带来的最大价值，那绝不仅仅是“几篇范文”那么简单，而是它提供了一种全新的、结构化的备考视角。在备考初期，我常常被自己想象出来的“高分标准”压得喘不过气，总觉得写作必须是天才的发挥。然而，通过细致研读这本书所展示的成功案例，我逐渐明白，雅思写作考核的核心在于“清晰的沟通能力”和“对特定任务的完成度”，而非华丽的辞藻堆砌。这本书成功地将这些抽象的标准，通过具体的、可模仿的文本案例具象化了。它像是一把精确的手术刀，解剖了高分作文的每一个组成部分，从开头如何抓人眼球，到主体段如何层层递进，再到结尾如何有力收束。对于那些花费了大量时间却收效甚微的考生来说，这本书提供了一个极佳的“校准器”，帮助我们把努力的方向从“盲目练习”转向“精准提升”。我强烈推荐给所有渴望在雅思写作部分实现质的飞跃的认真学习者。

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我必须承认，我是一个非常注重“实战模拟”的备考者，理论学习对我来说总是有点空中楼阁的感觉。这本书在提供范文之余，对于每个范文背后的“写作策略”的解析，简直是我的“秘密武器”。它不是简单地告诉你“这篇文章得了高分”，而是深入剖析了作者是如何应对这个特定题型的——比如，在分析因果题中，是如何平衡正反面论述的权重；在描述图表题（Task 1）中，又是如何选择最具代表性的数据进行提炼和对比的。这种策略层面的拆解，让我得以建立起一套可以复用的“题型解题框架”。以前写作文时，我总是在拿到题目后迷茫于“我该先说什么，后说什么”，但现在，我能迅速在脑海中对应到相应的框架模板，并根据题目内容填充具体的论据。这种“有章可循”的感觉极大地提升了我的写作速度和信心。特别是对于时间压力巨大的考试环境，能够快速锁定写作方向和结构，本身就已经是成功的一半了。可以说，这本书有效地将“写作”从一门“艺术创作”转变成了一项可以被系统化掌握的“应试技能”。

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书好，快递小哥态度更好。

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很好，雅思考试靠它很有帮助

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好好好好好好

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新东方值得信赖，雅思教学首选！

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京东正版价格实惠，物流迅捷，支付方便，值得推荐。

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，吗，丫头看完纪要给我微信了

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东西很好。速度超级快，昨晚下单今天就到了。牛逼

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书非常不错，多读读要好处

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品相好，当天送货到手。